Ms. Shira Hoffman

McIntosh & Otis, Inc.

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Ms. Shira Hoffman

McIntosh & Otis, Inc.

353 Lexington Avenue, 15th floor
New York, NY 10016


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Jan 25, 2015 7:25 pm, zeldamar said...
Good luck, AlexeiCollier, and thanks for passing on the info!
Jan 24, 2015 8:03 pm, samgodwin said...
Thanks for the extra info AlexeiCollier!
Jan 23, 2015 5:41 pm, AlexeiCollier said...
Thanks anyway. :)

Edit: I've decided to go ahead and send all the requested material, including my existing synopsis. It's possible she just wants the synopsis in .doc format, whereas before it was in the body of the email. I'll of course mention that she should contact me if she needs anything more/different.

Edit 2: Shira got back to me, and it turns out she DOES want a more detailed synopsis. She said a chapter by chapter synopsis would be fine. So there's a heads-up for anyone who gets a request from Shira and has the same question I did. :)
Jan 23, 2015 12:03 am, samgodwin said...
Wow, I've never really heard of a synopsis being longer than 3 pages. That is a bit odd. Sorry, no guidance to offer!
Jan 22, 2015 8:04 pm, AlexeiCollier said...
Close to three pages (650 words), but for a very long MS (epic fantasy, 154,000 words), so obviously I had to condense a lot in the synopsis.

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Middle Grade
Science Fiction
Women's Fiction
Young Adult

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